A brief rant inspired by the lady who picked a fight with me at that party in San Francisco called me an amateur writer and then lectured me for 20 minutes about why tEChNoLoGy Is BaD and MoNeY is EvIL.
I think this piece would be more successful with a little more nuance. It's clear you have a strong feelings, but painting your adversaries as a homogeneous group of idiots isn't really very interesting either.
Can we talk about the corporate cum in your eyes thing with a bit more nuance? Just to bring all sides to the table? Let’s make it a trauma-informed healing discussion
Approaching the interaction with more curiosity or empathy for the other person's perspective would have been more interesting to me. But, I get that this was intended to be a rant not a think piece.
She was REALLY mean to me for absolutely no reason. Like so out of pocket mean that I couldn’t really believe at the time that she was saying what she was saying. I should have slapped her. But I have this and this is better
This is the interplay. No “easy” answers, just braiding our humanity with cultural practices and tools. What I’m exploring over at earthstar111.substack.com
This is really great writing. I think you’d get a kick out of listening to the AI voice read it aloud.
Thank you! I would love to read this at a spoken word poetry event
I think this piece would be more successful with a little more nuance. It's clear you have a strong feelings, but painting your adversaries as a homogeneous group of idiots isn't really very interesting either.
hahah wow more nuance lol yes I would like to know the nuances of corporate cum lol great piece
Can we talk about the corporate cum in your eyes thing with a bit more nuance? Just to bring all sides to the table? Let’s make it a trauma-informed healing discussion
Ah yes the VISCOSITY pls
What nuances would you liked to have seen addressed?
Approaching the interaction with more curiosity or empathy for the other person's perspective would have been more interesting to me. But, I get that this was intended to be a rant not a think piece.
She was REALLY mean to me for absolutely no reason. Like so out of pocket mean that I couldn’t really believe at the time that she was saying what she was saying. I should have slapped her. But I have this and this is better
rules to live by:
the customer is always right
women b shopping
POW! Liked and subscribed.
What prompted her random speech? Girls don’t normally do that kinda thing?
It was crazy
This is very hateful and not constructive.
I see beauty there, one of Malevich punking out and filling the square with black, but these ideas are not the kind that grow and becomes something.
I wonder if author means it.
I mean… yeah we suck and we are moralizers. We try to reach out and resist the drug. And then succumb to it any way just in a different form.
Discarding the damage that done to us and diving into a pool of bile is just as silly.
Hope kinder muses come into your life. 🙏
Noooooo my muse is wicked and she thirsts for blood, I love her
Brilliant 😆
Fine. Let’s spectacle harder. Let’s turn the resentment into a lipstick line. Let’s leak corporate cum until we’re holy with it.
As opposed to what call to action? Let’s rot in obscurity so our work has zero impact and is essentially just self-indulgent creative masturbation?
Dude whatever
MEEEOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW says the __________ ?
Don’t say cum, they will come.
Well I certainly don't need another coffee. That was enough of a recharge.
Fantastic
Thank you🤍
Fuck nuance. Change nothing. Keep going.
Thank you🤍
Refreshing
Was that photo at the end supposed to make me agree or something?
No no that was just for her
Was that… her?
She’s already on my nerves
This is the interplay. No “easy” answers, just braiding our humanity with cultural practices and tools. What I’m exploring over at earthstar111.substack.com